How does this sound! It has to stand out.. and I would lovefor you look at it? 10 pts :) and a thankyou?
Apr 06, 2011 by Hobo Chrinical | Posted in Other - Arts & Humanities
How does this sound! It has to stand out.. and I would lovefor you look at it? 10 pts :) and a thankyou?
Mahatma Gandhi once stated ,"Live life as if you were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you will live forever." During my life, I have
It sounds fine to me as written. Add a little more, but you don't want go 'overboard'.
It IS possible that your life could end tomorrow by some mishap; and it's also both fun and wise to learn things everyday. I study everything - and
capwest5a | Apr 06, 2011
It sounds fine to me as written. Add a little more, but you don't want go 'overboard'.
It IS possible that your life could end tomorrow by some mishap; and it's also both fun and wise to learn things everyday. I study everything - and
capwest5a | Apr 06, 2011
Can some one please critique this I have to send it off today...thanks in advance?
Apr 07, 2011 by Hobo Chrinical | Posted in Books & Authors
Mahatma Gandhi once stated ,"Live life as if you were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you will live forever." These word have greatly shaped my aptitude for learning, and helping others. During my life, I have engaged in activities such as volunteering
Is this a college application essay? I have to say, it was impressive during the beginning and toward the middle. There is just a few grammar mistakes that need to be fixed. Also, there is extra words that need to be cut out. Here they are:
| Apr 07, 2011
You know, people treat this section- B&A- like a personal editing service. "Write this essay for me" , "Do my term paper for me" , ect. People get paid to critique papers, but then again, you're not gonna get any professional
Bella's Evil Twin | Apr 07, 2011
Looks OK to me - you have covered the questions asked of you - Good Luck :)
b.hole | Apr 07, 2011
Romeo And Juliet Question?
Apr 12, 2011 by Varun204 | Posted in Words & Wordplay
Translate a few lines of this
and describe the main point
SCENE III. Friar Laurence's cell.
Enter FRIAR LAURENCE, with a basket
FRIAR LAURENCE
The grey-eyed morn smiles on the frowning night,
Chequering
Flowrs
I *loved* the Kansas Land Trust mother's day walk in the prairie meadow. We tromped around with a botanist from KU who plucked various plant parts and told us their histories. It was part sun, part cloud and a beautiful day out in the rolling prairie farm land SE of the city. On the drive out we saw cows, goats, lots of birds (the birdsong was loud...
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Four Wonders of Yellow Mountain
Yellow Mountain (Huangshan) pines are seen in every corner of
Yellow Mountain. You will be amazed by their vitality and strength.
The seeds fall into the crevices where they take root and grow with
great vigor. The uneven terrain prevents the pines from growing
upright. Instead they become crooked and even downward. Another
feature of Huangshan pines is that many trees grow branches on one
side only. The pines grow very slowly due to the poor soil and
climatic conditions. A tree less than 3 meters (9.84feet) high may
have grown for over one hundred years or even several hundred
years. The root of a pine is several times or several dozens times
longer than the trunk, therefore Huangshan pines stand firmly with
dignity, withstanding wind and rain. Every pine is unique though:
Guest-Greeting Pine (in front of the stone lion of the Jade Screen
Pavilion in the Jade Screen Scenic Area), Guest-Goodbye Pine (to
the right of the Jade Screen Pavilion), Cushion Pine at Lotus
Valley, Phoenix Pine at the Sky Sea, Chessboard Pine at Pingtian
Stone Bridge, Kylin Pine between Bei Hai Hotel and the Refreshing
Terrace, Black Tiger Pine and Sea Exploring Pine are among the most
famous ones.
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Four Seasons in Yellow Mountain
Each of the four seasons on (Yellow Mountain) Mt. Huangshan has
their respective beauty but even this can vary from day to day
thanks to variations in the weather, light and shade as clouds pass
overhead and even around you at the higher reaches. This endless
changing adds an emphasis to the wonder of the landscape and to
know the mountain thoroughly, you would...
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